one
awaits
the coming of
spring with passion
we want those colored flowers and green grass
the fresh scent after rain with birds chirping
takes forever
for it to
arrive
now
Author notes
Tetractys -1,2,3,4,10 syllables. Have written two, back to back. My picture of my favorite flowers - pansies.
In a list
A contest entry
- Short Lived Short Form #4 by Samplette.
300 points, ended March 18, 2007, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Honorable Mention Pre-Writes Only- Pay It Forward by Mercury Rising.
600 points, ended July 6, 2007, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Time to upgrade those green shinies again! by Nicada.
1000 points, ended December 11, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
1 - 9 of 9
-
This is a beautiful form poem and it makes me wish for the beauty of spring even more. As you say here, it takes a long time to come around after a long, cold winter. Nice write, and thanks so much for entering. Blessings, Patty
-
Beautiful!!! Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
♥
whisper
-
A really lovely Tetractys poem that was a pleasure to read. Thanks for entering, and best of luck.
David
-
I love the picture of nature you painted in few words..lovely!
and thank you for sharing with us your viewers..
and all the best to you; love! -
This was a beautiful poem. I like the pretty blue pansies. I like the form. I should try the form. I love reading your poems.
-
Beautiful-
Love the images this brings forth and what a form...
Have not tried this one before
Beautifully penned my Friend
Congratulations on Your trophy win!
Many blessings to You
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
-
beautiful good luck in the contest
-
Beatifully written, accurately said. I am shivering now, cause I refuse to turn the heat up more. Hurry up sping, you are so wanted. lol...Thank you for entering the contest.
Sam
-
Fine as Peach Fuzz
Goodness gracias this is most deffinately true, I can't wait for spring... I love the form of it it's pretty cool, it takes some thinking to make a poem with physical form as well as verbal.
Adding your comment:
1 - 9 of 9
