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Alone

The moon appears,
and you visit me,
in my memory,

you're silent,
and you laugh,
ease the pain briefly,
untill I wake again,
alone,

The time regrets mistaking,
even the wind howles with pain,
has missed you,

The moon disappears,
I stay with empty hands,
the night takes you away,
and leaves me,
alone...

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  • Bones-Addict
    March 18, 2007
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    Amazing. I think you did a wonderful job on this. Good luck and thanks for entering the contest.