Incredible means not credible.
Holiday means holy day devils pun.
Tel-eye-vision lie to your vision.
Do we know where these words came from?
Do we know what we say when we say it?
Many people need to check thier speech.
It's hard to reach conclusions.
When there are so many confusions, of who and what we are.
Intrusions and bruises so deep they leave scars.
Keep up the struggle maintain you'll be a scholar.
There's nothing like knowledge and wisdom to make you soar farther.
Awakening the soul of things to bring forth your wholeness.
We all need his help no need to halfstep or sway.
The lord can only show you this if you meet him halfway .
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very good
I hope this is not too deep.
Nor should it put you to sleep.
Keep searching til you become a scholar.
Maintain with knowledge and you 'll go far.
With awakening the soul of things.
Bring forth life in an honest way don't sway.
And, the lord will show you the way.
i am touched by the u use rthyme. It is great on the line above. I think, u can try to make the other lines rythme too. The message is clear, keep this up. I love the wisdom!
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