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Watch Your Words

Watch your words they have power and meaning!!!
Be careful how you say what you say without prayer.

You bring life to your thoughts.
No matter what you have been taught.

Close attention or you'll start leaning,
Away from the beautiful things that you should never give up.

Life is tough which means so much.
Think before you speak make or break someone's week.

Keep the lord first he'll always quench your thirst.
Help you bring forth your girth.

Just please watch your words

They could be daggers and swords believe me I know.
Have faith in the almighty.

He doesn't want you to reap what you sow, he is mighty for sure.
Help create good things beyond your dreams that's the only way to go.

Just please watch your words.

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  • Musimwa
    April 5, 2007

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    Very good

    this has a powerful message too. I think we can work on reducing some unnecessary words eg "If u dont pay close attention" U can remove pay.It will still sounds ok, Check on; so (4th stanza) u can eliminate some. Keep it up