Look over your shoulders..
is he still there?
look carefully,
he might make his move
Trembling and anxious
not knowing what to come next
fearing the unknown
from a raging man's fist
Or is it his lust?
lust towards the innocent
to make them victims and truanced
Acid of burning desires
reside within an innocent child
crying and mobilized
a child so weak she can't fight
Years follow,
and years passed
Only the wicked,
who get smoked!
Maybe triumph comes to law
but defeat stays in the child's soul
memory and mind
still,
so imobolized
Please tell me what you think
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Wow! A truly captivating read.. The last stanza was so unexpected... Great choice of words and amazing description... Nicely written with intensely expressed emotions...
An enchanting read.
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trueee
is it about....that worthless soul who _ _ _ _ _ you?
it's deep and heart touching.....for those who know....i didn't went through these...but i was close enough....she's still free...ehm...a minor -.- ... great piece
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ye, it is
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This is potent in its message. Also an "i" was omitted from 'resde'. The last stanza is a great finish. Nice penning.
~*Starr*~ XXX
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same reply to the other one
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"fearng the unknown" You left out the i in fearing you put it as fearng Other then this it was a well written and thought out poem. Thank you for sharing this with us
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lol, yeah my keyboard is wireless and works with batteries, the battery's energy is abit low now been usin it from long, so cuz l type too fast it doesn't keep up with me!!
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