For the first time in weeks
there's no hangover
lurking around the corner.
I checked.
The enemy in my head
(and my stomach)
has been vanquished.
Every hero needs a villain.
What will I do now?
Please tell me what you think
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I love this. I have been looking at a couple of your pieces. there is something about the brevity of your sentences that is captivating. terse, but honest. to the point. You take a simple idea here and give it a deeper meaning. excellent.
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Very amusing. I have read two of your things now, and I like what I read. It is fresh and full of humour. I shall definitely read more. I know, people say that all the time, and then do not, but I intend to do so.
Thank you for sharing.
rous
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perfect. real. genuine. absolutely a great write!!!
overall, i loved the way you have thought everything out and your ending seems to sum up where you are heading.
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what will you do now indeed?
an excellent write,
good to see words from you here beebs.
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