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Sunday Morning

For the first time in weeks
there's no hangover
lurking around the corner.
I checked.

The enemy in my head
(and my stomach)
has been vanquished.

Every hero needs a villain.

What will I do now?

Please tell me what you think

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  • grassisgreener
    May 4, 2007

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    I love this. I have been looking at a couple of your pieces. there is something about the brevity of your sentences that is captivating. terse, but honest. to the point. You take a simple idea here and give it a deeper meaning. excellent.


  • Elrenia
    March 28, 2007
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    Very amusing. I have read two of your things now, and I like what I read. It is fresh and full of humour. I shall definitely read more. I know, people say that all the time, and then do not, but I intend to do so.

    Thank you for sharing.

    rous


  • panegyric ink
    March 25, 2007

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    perfect. real. genuine. absolutely a great write!!! overall, i loved the way you have thought everything out and your ending seems to sum up where you are heading.


  • rebeka
    March 19, 2007

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    what will you do now indeed?

    an excellent write,
    good to see words from you here beebs.