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Holding Back

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I feel i might have found

An angel in this world

Someone sweet yet strong

Someone with whom i can share

What is really going on

This angel is as elusive as

The beautiful fae

Who live in the night

 Her words ring softly in my ear

Her cheer brightins my days

 

I want to tell her these things

But i dont dare

For i dont want to lose her as a friend

I keep her close as long as i can

But i hold back

What i want to say

as i speak to her through out the day

 

There was once feelings but not anymore

yet at times her actions are confusing

They puzzle me every time

As if she knew she were

messing with me intintionally

So as i hold back on my feelings

I hope that one day

She will tell me the 

Three words I want to say

In a list

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  • Vorondwen gold member
    March 22, 2007

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    Deep

    Oh, how many times so many of us have felt like this. Just a week or two ago 2 guys I wanted to date in highschool told me they liked me in highschool. The one said he regretted not asking me out or sharing his feelings then. If she's a real friend, you expressing your feelings shouldn't drive her away if hers are not the same for you. But neither of you will be left wondering.

    Now as for the poem itself, beautifully written. The stanzas flow together well. Another bittersweet tale of humanity.