In quiet places near the edge of space
Dreams of fantasy, flights near stars
You'll find a traveler mingling there
Touching hearts with whispers clear
Dreaming dreams and passing them on
Bringing smiles and thoughts of cheer
For all to breath and hold endeared
Grace upon her gives off light
Loving thoughts & smiles of joy
Breathing warmth in every way
Takes a moment to reflect
Thinking of a special gift
Flown across many a quiet mile
Touching softly one true soul
A Birthday wish in Vernal Bloom
Author notes
Happy Birthday To You VB!!! From the people that love you here and there.....
A contest entry
- In Honor of Those of You Gifting Me a Rebirth on AP by Vernal Bloom.
525 points, ended April 4, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very beautifully penned my friend.A very heart touching piece.Words with a glorious rhythm that flow with such grace.Elegantly written.
Good Luck in your contest
Blessings
~Cheryl~
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Thank you for such a wonderful comment! I'm truly happy you liked it, Don
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Don, my friend!
It was really a beautiful poem with vivid imaginations. I enjoyed every single words you penned and treasure it. It is really great to receive love from those whom you love yourself. Millions thank for entering this sweet-birthday poem in the contest and best of luck to you in the contest
~Massy~
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thank you Massy for such a warm considerate comment and applause. I am so happy that you found this poem to be so comforting. Loved doing this one for two exceptional ladies. Happy Birthday my friend, Don
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Beautifully Penned
Waht a wonderful description of the love and grace my sweet Massy expels...
Great write...
and thank you for honoring my sweet Niecey on her birthday
xoxo
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Thank you much!
The pleasure is mine to write for two ladies I appreciate and reward you both as you do deserve the rewards. My friends and AP pals in truth and caring, Don
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