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Serenity

Serendipitous silence surrounds
Entirely. Every elegant
Rose reaches randomly
Entirely encompassing erotic
Nymph, naked, nonetheless
Insightfully illustrates irrational
Thoughts. Tender touches
Yearn youthful years.

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  • cute mayoush
    March 19, 2007
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    AWESOME WRITE...WELL DONE INDEED
    TOTALLY AMAZIN
    THXX FOR SHARING IT
    MAYA


  • shysky
    March 18, 2007

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    This style was different I'd never heard of anything like this before thank you for taking the time to explain it to me i like the style of it


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    March 18, 2007

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    Generally I don't like acrostics which depend on the initial letter of each line, preferring hidden acrostics. But this really is very cute! The alliteration really works very well.


  • Heavens Child
    March 18, 2007
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    Very Nice

    This is an interesting view on serenity. Thank you for entering my contest.