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I Love A Ghost

How can I keep doing this?
I want to love you but it's too hard
I wanna be true to you
But the thought...stabs my heart with broken shards

It's been so long
And you've begun to fade
There's no trace of you here
Not a piece of you remaining

I feel sick

Beacause I can't remeber your face
Can't hear your voice
And can't feel your touch

It's like you were never there
Like I've always been alone

I go to sleep frozen at night
And awaken to see no one in sight
No empty space or anything
It breaks my heart when I see nothing

My lover is a ghost

I love you but...

No

No longer you
I'm in love with the thought of you
Because you are not here

Please come back...
I don't like being alone.

I can't remeber your face
Can't hear your voice
And can't feel your touch

It's like you were never there..

Author notes

It's been siz months since I that saw either one of my boyfriends....I'm going crazy!

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  • campslack
    March 27, 2007
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    Awesome poem. this is freakin awesome!!!

  • TragicFlaw
    March 19, 2007

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    "I'm in love with the thought of you" This line left me speechless. The rest i liked, and i was able to connect with, but that line made me pause. it shows alot of sorrow and longing, at times frustration... i liked it alot. I liked how your title tied into what you were saying in the poem too. very well done