Stay In The Pink Health Foods
A contest entry
- Help me finish the project that's in my head. by bird at rose.
450 points, ended April 25, 2007, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Nicely Casted
Waving hello, this is attractive... I got out of it the metaphor imagery is that it's like walking on a narrow road of an eating style! And, someone is telling you to not fall in the ditch because then, you haven't had enough strength yet from the good food to want to climb back up to the right way.
I like this and I hope I got your meaning that you put into this. By that you have a short beat in each word of your name, it passed criteria test because the store, "Vitamin Cottage Natural Grocers" is wide but used as well.
Only one question, would you do a favor for me and try to keep my contest anonymous with adding "Please don't use my name in your reviews" or something like it to your author notes? Also, if you have anything to say to me, please put them in your AN too without rating nor replying to my comment, please.
Blowing thoughts towards this as you've followed my standards,
SplishSplashPencil // your swimming host
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