Smooth and subtle
With soft curves
Gentle to the touch
Firm in its beauty
Yet withering too soon
Leaving a fragrance to linger
In our memory
Purity personified
Forever white
In a list
A contest entry
- white by Cat.
300 points, ended March 19, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Superb
A most exquiste write indeed. Perfect imagery for the ideas you are trying to convey. -
Excellent
Gifted writing
Love the paralle immage in this
very well done
Like this
Gentle to the touch
Firm in its beauty
Yet withering too soon
Leaving a fragrance to linger
Lovely
Rick
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mary cat may i say that if you read into poems then you get a true insight you have just looked at the picture and not at the words..shameful.. esp when your running a contest
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ohhhh i love this... the alliteration at the end of the poem adds strength and power to the last line very very clever excellent...you have created such a sexual image well done love i love it xxxxx
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the contest name was white- not white rose- i generally dislike poetry which describes the picture -
i just think this piece could have been further explored and a much better poem could have been discovered by the author
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Beautiful
Such beauty, could himan make some a flower, with fragrance and delightful to behold and delicate. You did an excellent write here, and your words touch me deeply. Thank you for sharing.
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Three thumbs up. Now, to figure out how to accomplish that. Bunnies don't have thumbs, do they?
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This is really great. I love white roses. I WOULD however suggest that you change the text color as it's very hard to rean with the background you've chosen
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wonderful imagery here and the pic goes right on with the words...Excellent descriptive write....Good job!
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