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Rain - Lanturne

 

Rain

Gently

Falling down

So serene am

I

 

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Lanturne form- syllable count 1, 2, 3, 4, 1

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  • McRae by nature
    September 30, 2007
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    Rain can be so serene. This was very beautiful. Thanks for the entry.

    Carrie


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    April 3, 2007

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    Rain Gently Falling down This makes me so calm just thinking about it...You are a EXCELLENT writer


  • Game Master
    April 1, 2007
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    That was short but sweetI love it


  • campslack
    March 27, 2007
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    i love the rain and the set up of this poem. awesome!!!

  • Bob Fox
    March 25, 2007
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    And I too

    Love the rain as it brings me peace. Short & sweet . just so calming


  • joyya
    March 17, 2007

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    I like this a lot. Rain has a way of making me feel peaceful, or as you wrote, serene. Beautiful. The picture is very fitting to this write.


  • wild horse
    March 17, 2007
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    you did wonderful this is very short but cute


  • Dreamer With Dreams silver member
    March 17, 2007

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    I love lanturnes! They're so easy to write. This is a good one. I really like the last two lines. Well done!

    Safely hidden in the darkness,

    ~ the Rocker who lost all

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