I heard you call...
when you took
to your flight
a pair of love-
struck Falcons...
as though you
wanted audience
to witness the sight
-an image of
Nature's Omniscience
So Powerful
and Radiant!
-Yet, you are
...the Halcyon-
How you danced
with each other
-riding the wind-
Flying above
Mount Olympus
-So Magnificent-
The Birds that
the Gods did send!
Swirling, spiraling
and twirling...
In ecstatic passion
You soar...
-Golden-
Fiery Reflections
of the Sun...
to the Earth
Diana's grace
You Pour!
©Copyright March 17, 2007
By Karen Lee Gilbert Eisenlord
All Rights Reserved
Please tell me what you think
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OOOh, I love it! That's a great subject to write about! I've never seen something like it!
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This is really awesome. I love birds, so of course I would like this poem, but it was very well written too. I like how you described them and their flight. This was a really good write. Alyssa
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Love,love,love!
Love this poem from start to finish,
Very intresting how you wrote it from a knowing point of view,
like you are these things you describe !,
Very well done on this lovely piece,
Love Millie
xxx
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Ah, this is a lovely poem..I really enjoyed reading it. Very wonderfully describes nature's beauty.
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Very beautiful and descriptive of nature in such a spiritual way. Very well written. The flow is wonderful. Thank you for sharing your talent.
Jeannie
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to the Earth
Diana's grace
You Pour!
This is a very beautiful poem by the soul of a poet brining a kind of the beauty of the world as well...It is a beautiful voice of the heart which is not only an innocent one but at the same time gifted with the sentiment of the divine feeling that is graced here in this poem in every word and every line as well..It is a great write revealing the universal strength of the life ...Indeed a brilliant write here..
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As usual, you give me too much credit my dear friend. If any thing deserves credit here it is all the beauty, the grace, the strength and innocence of Nature and the Divine that flows through Her, and as times touches and inspires me to write it down in a few feeble words that is impossible to measure up to what I truly feel and see because of Her.
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Anyone who references Greek mythology is a friend o' mine. I feel transported by the writing and the backdrop.
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Superb!
Wonderful! This is amazing!
I love poems with a bit of mytholgy in them.. you have mythology, imagery and amazing word choice and I can see it all! Very magical and beautiful!
Really, I loved this!
And I hope you will continue to write.
Nooni -
nice poem and nice imagery. near where i live we have apartment calls "Falcon Woods Apartment".
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I am glad that you like it. It is a simple poem, but reflects my profound respect and admiration for the beauty and awesome healing power of Nature. She has literally been like a Mother to me, enveloping me within the Womb of her Love and Graceful Wonders.
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i'm realy impressed by the imegery you've used here but most importantly it doesn't ever shadow the meaning and the emotion behind your piece. Well done again, this isn't the style i choose to write in but i enjoyed it none the less.
thanks fort he read,
One Angry Monkey
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very good
I could picture the falcons in mid flight. your discriptions are good.
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Thank you for your comment on "Flight of the Falcons". I'm glad that you liked it. It's scenes like this that make life worthwhile!
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woderful
My favorite piece Diana's grace YOU pour!!!!!!!! -
Very graceful and peaceful this had good imagery and was very tastefully done. Thank you for sharing this with us it was wonderful
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Flight of the Falcons
I'm glad you liked "Flight of the Falcons". I look so forward to their show of grace and beauty. I haven't seen them for a while.
They come around more in the Spring and Summer, of course!
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Very peaceful that peice. The flight of the Falcon is always something of grace and beauty to watch. Their swirling and dancing with each other something very sweet.
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very nice. I wasn't sure what to expect when I clicked on this one. I was pleasently surprised. I liked it very much! I thought your background choice was great for this poem. thanks for sharing. keep em coming! peace and light, kp
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Evocative.
There is superb imagery here, two beautiful creatures soaring heavenwards and inviting the approbation of the Olympian Gods themselves. This is an enjoyable read.
Rgds
Strolling Minstrel.
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