Let me be your music
with lyrics of passion
touching your heart
I have searched for you in my
nights of silence
Knowing I would find a love
that allowed me to soar
attaining heights unknown
Now that you are here
I offer all that I have
For you enhance
my essence
Kiss me gently
as I melt into your breath
Feeling your heat through
my veins,
capturing our oneness
Whisper to me songs from
your soul
As our bodies dance to the
rhythm of a song unsung
There is no lyric to the music
of us
In a list
A contest entry
- Contest: Seduce Me With Your Song (adult) by Night Hope.
450 points, ended March 31, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I can understand, "There is no lyric to the music
of us. "Often times it’s very difficult putting the appropriate words to emotions/feelings. For me, your music with lyrics of passion touches my heart.”
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I have searched for you in my
nights of silence
ohhhh i want those lines lol this is well im stuck for words its flaming amazing.. you keeping secrets from me?? where you getting your pics lol you are one amazing poem love you really are and im so proud to know you xxxx -
Ahhh lovingly sensual! What with being a music lover myself and also a bass tinkerer I have to admit some appreciation for your write just on that part too.
As a big fan of ending a poem just right, I love your ending here too. It leaves one with one last great sigh before saying goodbye. A very beautifully written expression of romance and senuality.
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Such a passionate heartfelt piece full of my favourite thing "love", you have expressed your feelings for another beautifuly. Well done... thankyou for sharing.
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What a truly beautiful sensual piece! Sigh...
Makes me think of the one I love and how awesome it is to make music together!
All the best to you in the contest! -
"Whisper to me songs from
your soul
As our bodies dance to the
rhythm of a song unsung
There is no lyric to the music
of us"
Sighhh...Ahhh, yes, Noreen...Firstly; what a great background & graphic, my Friend...Wherever are you finding these great pictures you've been using??? A lot of it is presentation, as you well know...The background & picture become the frame for the real art; your poem...Music IS passion, to me, in so many ways...The song of Life is the rhythm of Love...This is a serene, knowing, sensual piece...Thank you for entering...Good luck...
Wanda
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Sweet words indeed.
Wonderful, asnd so delightful and filled with emotions that I love it. Loved the flow and the melting into each other, almost forgot, you were not writing it to me. Great.
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Oh wow, have you outdone yourself on this one...being a music lover this was soooo sensual, love the imagery and my fav line..."Whisper to me songs from
your soul
As our bodies dance to the
rhythm of a song unsung"
k ..lol..stanza.....this was absolutely bea---uuu---teeeefulllll! Way to go! Good luck..You Rock!
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Tastefully sensual, and great imagery in this write. The mind creates it's own lyrics, and the melody is played to the rhytmn of beating hearts. Very nicely done
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