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A cold flake of ice, melting like life.

What a cold thing
To land during spring
But just as it is here
It quick disappears

Why did it come
When not welcome?
Only to melt
As soon as it's felt?

Why did it stray
To this terrible place?
Only to pass
Where it could not last

A flake gone astray
Fell on the wrong day
A cold flake of white
Melted like ice

And so as my life
Melts right by
I fall to the ground
Never seen, never found

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  • Rianna Bear
    March 18, 2007

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    - I love it! That was really awesome and the rhyme added to the flow as I read it.

    good luck in my contest
    *Rianna