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Calling All Angels

I'm calling all angels,
you must come and see.
She's dieing down there,
you must help her, please!

A slap to the cheek,
a punch to the chest.
Her heartbeat is slowing,
soon it will rest!

I'm calling all angels,
you must come and see.
She's dieing down there,
She's on her knees!

Tears flood her face,
sobs fill the night.
She's trying so hard,
She can't win this fight!

I'm calling all angels,
you must come and see.
She's dieing down there,
She's already paid her fee!

Her body is still,
She's covered in red.
Pick her up,
put her in her bed!

I'm calling all angels,
you must come and see.
She's dead down there,
save her, take me!

Author notes

This is dedicated to two special friends extremely close to my heart. It's more about one of them than the other, but it still stands for both of them.

I love you two.

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  • theredcatjazzoflove
    May 26, 2007

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    You have...

    digged deep down with the art of poetry writing and delivered me and other readers a ginuine side in you that speaks complete essence dear. i love this write i really really like this. hugs


  • iiFeLLintoAhole
    March 18, 2007

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    Very lovely. It shows how much you care for your friends. I think that's just very sweet. They are very lucky to have you as a friend. And you know what I think, You are their angel.


    • Blaze1616
      March 18, 2007
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      Well, thank you Vic. I wouldn't consider myself an angel, but then who knows.