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Midnight Mustang

This love is eternal,

it's never ending.

It's fast and it's moving,

it's moving me to you.

It's taking me hostage,

it's stealing my heart.

It's making me wonder,

what I really want.

This night, this night,

it's telling me something.

It's taking me up high,

it's captivating me.

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  • peridotPixi
    August 12, 2008
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    oh yeah and congrats on your pevious silver

  • peridotPixi
    August 12, 2008
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    i love the captivating way you have captured that midnight mustange i love the way this poem flows and it is very beautiful i like the way you say that it is taking you hostage and stealing your heart, you forgot to mention what picture of mine this poem realates too, however this is beautiful thank you for the entry and as always keep up the great writing, ~Amy


  • Timeless Wisdom silver member
    July 1, 2007
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    Thanks alot for your wonderful entry. Sorry about the delay on the comments...I have a busy and hectic life that is fixing to get more hectic. But thanks for the patience.

  • Timeless Wisdom silver member
    June 22, 2007

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    WOW...TOTALLY AWESTRICKEN!!!!!!! The overall symbolism of this poem was unimaginable!!!! GREAT JOB AND THANKS ALOT FOR THIS WONDERFUL ENTRY!!!!!!

    ~Raymond~


  • Celticmoon
    April 4, 2007
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    Oh I like this. I like the fast pace of this piece. It moves with speed just as a mustang would in the open lands. Your rhyme is perfect and the flow was dead on in my opinion. I enjoyed this piece and think you did a great job with your title. Thank you for entering and good luck!


  • Rakerman1
    March 19, 2007

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    I can tell from this write and all the others...that I should have picked another contest to enter lol

    Excellent creativity
    Well done
    Raker


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    March 18, 2007

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    wow this is something, as you put it in the end it captivates me, not your words but you know what i mean, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest

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