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ONLY A kid

                                                                  Do not judge me by my number

                                                                     I can tell from truth to a lie

                                                                     I know when to fight tears

                                                                 I know why someone has to die

                                                                            

                                                                            A kid is young

                                                                  With small fingers and finger nails

                                                                       With pink small tounges

                                                            With smaller eyes and they might always fail

                                                            

                                                                   WE kids need more respect

                                                       No scary movies for us unless we want to watch it

                                                                         But I do not mean that

                                                          You don't have to worship us, just save us, tell us whats right and a bit

                                                                                    of knowledge from you

 

 

 

                                                                                 Kids! WE ARE NOT JUST KIDS

                                                                               WE ARE HUMANS

 

 

 

 

 

                                                             

 

 

 

                                                                      

 

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  • Lorien
    March 31, 2007
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    This is great your really really good at poetry
    im jealous


  • Gasp
    March 20, 2007

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    cute, i like it! this has a great point to it you should write more...i'll read it all and help you out =)


  • Moon baby lulla bye
    March 18, 2007

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    are you serious! your only eight. that is so good. i loved how you showed that kids shouldnt be treated like babies and have their own thoughs and stuff. i know how you feel. when i was eight i was treated like a total baby. i couldnt do anything. anyway its a really good poem especialy since your only eight. keep it up.

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    March 17, 2007
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    Well done. Thanks for entering my contest.
    Good luck.

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