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Wanted:Someone to Hold Me

Fallen,Lost,Cold,
Empty in every way
This road labeled life
Mocks me,
Hating me,
Tourtureing me.
I just want to get away

Nothing seems to be right
Confusion put me in a chokehold
Tearing at my thoughts
Piercing them,
And smearing them over my face
These feelings about life
Throw me into a chamber to rot
I feel nothing but lost

Why can't I do anything right
My words can't win this fight
I just want the simple desire
Of wanting
And knowing things will last

Am I doing everything wrong
Is there a certintity I'm missing
A key to the padlock of these frozen gates
Closing in my emotions
I'm not me!
I need someone to set me free
Someone to untie these bounded wings
Someone to hold me tightly
And tell me everythings all right
To hold my hand
To make sure the tears I cry
Are true enough to cry
To tell me I'll be okay
To make me understand
We'll all get by.

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  • pickers silver member
    March 17, 2007

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    Wow!

    I love the line about smearing your thoughts over your face. It feels like the ultimate exposure, for your thoughts to be so visible, and humiliating at the same time, to have something on your face. Stunning imagery! You captured something I have felt many times. I love it when that happens. Lovely. Well done.