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journey to hell

Dark in bed, I see,
The creature standing over me,
Cloaked figure who makes it hard to breathe,
Satan himself in my room,
Pulling at my sheets for my doom,
Sweating and shaking Im cold,
Death whispers in my ear,


Dont make a peep,
For your still asleep,
We have come for reasons unknown,
What I do know, is that he wants you,
Go with him, take his hand,
You have nothing to fear but fear itself,
So come with us on our little journey,


I wake to find myself in my bed,
Shrugging it off as a dream,
I look at my hands to be sure,
Burned hand prints on my arm,
Brimstone scented hair,
Hyperventilate sulfur gas,


My journey to hell i dont recall,
But the aftermath is far from gone,
I remeber how he made me feel,
Petrified and unable to breathe,
My bumped and wet,
Every hair standing up,
I felt as though all the sorrow and hate had been laid upon me,
And his icy words still linger in the back of my skull,


Dont make a peep,
For your still asleep,
We have come for reasons unknown,
What I do know, is that he wants you,
Go with him, take his hand,
You have nothing to fear but fear itself,
So come with us on our little journey,


Had I heard Satan himself,
Or was it a minion,
But I know it was him,
Every depiction of is not right,
He did not want to be seen,
A hooded figure, tall,
Standing over me,


Pray for the lord dont come again,
But he did,
Fire and Brimstone arnt for me,
lord dont let me sleep,
It was once a welcome demon,
no longer is it for me,


So lay down your claw,
Keep your words from me,
No more will you kiss my lips,
Redemption  ill take,
I am no longer Satan's bitch,
Demon and all,
I have cast my horns for a halo,
Lust is no longer for you...







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take this literally and you will find the truth

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  • ConvenientExcuses
    March 22, 2007

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    ahhh sorry I didn't comment on this one! can't believe I missed it. anyways, it's amazing. but it worries me that this is personal. hope everythings ok.
    ♥Jessica


  • CrystalButterfly
    March 20, 2007
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    ...wow this is a great poem and i love how you wrote it!
    Nice job!
    Sara