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Big Cry

Bye closed in on me
Igniting a hopeless fire
Gravity pulling heartstrings

Crying huge raindrops
Rainbows fill my bitter heart
Yesterday's finally gone!

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  • HerbalGoat
    March 31, 2007

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    Very deep. I know this feeling all to well. I like your angst and feeling that you have placed in this wondeful piece.