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Birthday Suit

You are invited to spend an afternoon with me
Come over for a cup of tea
I have a new one on the way
I suppose you could say
“I’m all set”
I have the crib and bassinet
It would  be nice to have a sweater
To put on in cool weather
Or a set of diapers
And a can of wipers
As my new one enters the world
And before him it unfurls
He looks cute
But he needs more than his birthday’s suit

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

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  • grannyeri gold member
    March 18, 2007

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    What a cute way of inviting others to a baby shower. neat idea for a contest too. Enjoyed the images of babies and all the stuff that goes with them. Easy to read and understand as well.


  • Princess Ayeka
    March 17, 2007

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    This is prefect, exactly what I was looking for! Great job, and good luck in the contest! (Oh, we found out yesterday that this baby is a boy...we already have a little girl ^-^ )


  • Layla Thomas
    March 17, 2007
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    cute one :-) my son is just over 2 months old..