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My AP Dad

Andy Stephenson is his name,
He writes poetry for fun not fame.
He doesn't ignore me because i'm a child,
Not even if i go wild.

Everybody loves his ways,
A sharp message he conveys.
Fight always for what's right,
No matter a guy's height.

Gold silvers and Bronze,
lined up in his shelf.
He works with perseverence,
He writes with Jackie X or himself.

Lots of talent to go with,
Lots of great attitude.
No matter how small a deed is,
He always is full of gratitude.

He speaks in easy and simple english,
Even vampires(hehe) will like him.
He is very supportive to everybody,
to play the guitar or write poetry.

Spend 10 minutes in his court,
You'll like him all your minutes.
Keep rocking people's world,
You are a great friend and father. 

Author notes

In the first 2 verses,the lines rhyme with the one after it.In the next 2 verse,the 2nd and 4th lines rhyme.The last 2 verses in freeverse.Cool,ah?

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  • HaleighGrace
    March 27, 2007
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    LUCKY US

    I AGREE with you that Andy is a great person. I wasnt quite sure here when I entered as my AP mom is Andys real sister and i thought by far your poem was excellent.Congratulations on your trophy and obviously we have 2 of the greatest parents on AP.
    HALEIGH


  • swanridur
    March 18, 2007
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    I like this very much, your AP Dad sounds brilliant. I like the way you use different styles. Well done master poet. I like the line' He doesn't ignore me if I'm a child even if I go wild'. That's how a dad should be. Good luck SR


  • Mekhala
    March 18, 2007

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    Great job! Your AP dad sounds very nice...good to here from you after LONG! Keep on writing well and good luck for the contest!

  • jacksm
    March 17, 2007

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    What a great poem!

    Your dad sounds awesome! It's so nice to have family (particularly parents) that you can think of as friends rather than authorative figures. Great job and good luck in the contest!

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