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Skip a beat

We haven't known eachother that long
I have your back and you have mine
Though What we have is some kind of love song
Just you in my life makes living devine

Before meeting you it was hard to care
We talk and its almost like Your here
The miles between just arn't fair
You make my heart caring and sincere

When we talk my heart skips a beat
I get butterflies deep in my tummy
Your not just a pretty face, Girl your complete
Always there to pick me up when I feel crummy

When I fell for you I fell hard
Your so perfect and so sweet
I care so much I let down my guard
You make my heart skip a beat




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yea its not good and its definetly embarassing

GOOD TALK

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  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    March 19, 2007

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    It is good and it is sweet and very heartfelt and whoever it is written about they truly deserve a man with such feelings. and i hope she makes your dreams come true. a great write hun well done


  • Child of an Angel
    March 17, 2007

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    She must be a special person! You are a great person who deserves the best, and hopefully she is just as good for you as you would be to her. Dont let her ruin you either
    Always
    Emily