When you love someone
You never forget them
They are forever a treasure of memories
But now that I'm the reason
That treasure, is a ghost
The memories haunt my every thought
Of what I could have had
If I had done the right thing
Author notes
It was my fault we broke up... I had lied to him.. then told him that I had lied and he couldn't take it... I know I should have kept my mouth shut.. but when you love someone, you want to be truthful don't you?
I miss him so much.. I wish I could take back my lie.. ='(
If any of you have felt like this... Please comment...
Comments
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this is an awesome write.(in the sense of style and rhythm) keeping it short like you have adds to the sadness and the pain that you have expressed. It is hard to tell the truth, but I have been told it is better to tell it straight away rather wait for karma.
I hope things get better for you soon.
Thankyou for entering and goodluck
~Hollow~ -
I have felt like this on many occasions and seeing youlike this is murdering me hun. I hope you feel better, you just gotta *Sings*
Keep on swimming, keep onswimming, just keep swimming swimming swimming.... -
Painful
its very sad,i have lost friends befor when they have moved away.i love your poem short with much meaning great job with your poem.
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