Again, I am sending you one little epitaph
to follow when you seek my depth.
Once again I am positioning as a stupid.
Last night when I promised myself,
not to send you any more signal
this piece was already written.
So, I am going to shed my tears once again
for not being so rational like you.
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Thanks a lot for your nice comment.
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G'Day Romily
Quite an interesting poem, the only thing I didn't understand was
"Once again I am positioning as a stupid."
It really doesn't flow much with the rest of the right.
Still well expressed.
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Thank you for your entry
Best of luck
Stay safe
~Manda
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This is an emotional little piece about love and lost love. It has a very honest feel to it, which I love. Thanks for entering.
DancingRed.
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I like last two lines,
"So, I am going to shed my tears once again
for not being so rational like you."
I also find the title interesting.
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Intersting. Great job. Good luck in my contest!!!
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" Last night when I promised myself,
not to send you any more signal
this piece was already written"
I liked the way you wrote about your feelings. Grat job!
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