1. Pink's Palace
2. Nature's Kitchen
3. Pink's Delights
Author notes
Please don't use my name in your reviews.
A contest entry
- Help me finish the project that's in my head. by bird at rose.
450 points, ended April 25, 2007, 25 entries
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It looks cute, your stroll of apostrophes
I know you're a real person even though anonymous,
#1 isn't too different than "Pink Palace" that was listed in, "Names for Pink's Restaurant." And, yet, this has the specialty that it's her chateau. In the first criteria, it not only worked, but sounded electronic.
Wow, I think you might've looked at one of the names in "Quick List" and noticed that it broke a rule, so you chopped it down to "Nature's Kitchen." This reminds me of a tent, outdoor // "nature" snack shop. She won't carry tons of raw meals for the place to be named after letting it do simple ripening, sadly. My mamma would've wanted to used this name as a title for a recipe of patience book if the contest weren't strictly for play. Although, in criteria, this sounded like a child running the business rather than being pronounceable.
I also love the center alignment, it makes me think of a haiku especially with the few things written down finalizing at "Pink's Delights." Everyone's different, & this is what she feasts on so much that she feels it's good as a business. Criteria moved me.
Thanks for entering, I smiled.
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