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The nice guy

                                Beautiful eyes,
                                I dream of,
                              He is there for me.
                          I know, that he will love me.
                                    He's my guy,
                                  I can count on.
                              Maybe I've found him,
                                maybe not.
                        I wanna guy that likes me for me,
                                  he is nice,
                                  he is soft,
                        he will always make me laugh! 
                              I wanna be happy with him!
                            He will love me, forever, and ever.

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    March 17, 2007

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    this is good, i think this is what most woman dream about, but it is funny, how that works in fate, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • Pixie Girl
    March 17, 2007
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    i think you just summed up what we all want in a guy. A really nice write here


  • shutter-bug
    March 17, 2007

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    wow! a happy poem!! lol, jkjk. this is a nice write. it has a happiness, a security, and sense of confidence that permiates the entire piece. i really like it!