wishing for color on the other side,
my toes drank of the Red Sea,
but there was no God to part it for me.
and honey, I did my part,
but
it's hard to say "no"
to someone with strong hands
and selective hearing.
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Author notes
either about rape
or abortion.
In a list
A contest entry
- yellow afterbirth by SurelyWritten.
300 points, ended March 20, 2007, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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it's hard to say "no"
to someone with strong hands
and selective hearing.
a.maz.ing.
powerful.
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I hear the 'rape' in this poem, but I would be more likely to hear that than 'abortion.' Another good one.
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amazing darling;;
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thanks
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it's hard to say "no"
to someone with strong hands
and selective hearing.
\\baby//
greattt job
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No matter how many times you say to yourself in a mirror "tell 'em no, tell'em no" ... it never comes out that way. It comes out more like a hiss.
Yeah, don't ask about my comments lately. -
"and honey, I did my part,
but
it's hard to say "no""
I hope you know.
That you're just freaking amazing.
♥
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haha, aww *kisses the computer screen*
love you!!!
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hmmm interesting very interesting
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or both- excellently penned, the brevity is rare for this subject and very unique.. i adored this write, thanks for entering.
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I wasn't sure if I had to use those words in the poem, or just be inspired by them....?
but I had fun writing this
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no- you didn't have to use the words in this, only as inspiration.
:]
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yes, isn't it though. ♥
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xoxx ♥
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