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Lost Life

Silence does speak
In deserts even rain does come.
But you'll not be back
Like clouds never will we rome.
I know my dreams are never to be true.
So why should I live without you?

My soul does mourn
And all my desires are torn.
Now I ask myself
Why did I let you go?
From my life
While I knew
That there will be no return and nothing will survive
Once you are gone.

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  • Corinthians13-4
    March 17, 2007
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    After reading this, I take a sharp intake of air. This poem was indescribably incredible! So sad, so true, so WONDERFUL! Loss is everywhere, it is tragic. But it takes a tragedy for a miracle to happen. Great write, and keep 'em coming.


    • Shapla
      March 17, 2007
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      Thanks a lot for so much appreciation. God bless you.