as imaginary as
the belt that extends
8 degrees on each side of the ecliptic--
yet I still choose to believe
you're there?
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Author notes
take it how you want.
I don't like this one. maybe I'll enter a different one......
In a list
A contest entry
- The Letters: "X " & "Z" by deadcolor dreams.
600 points, ended March 18, 2007, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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mhm my last relationship was like this. BRILLIANTLY DONE crash! =]
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Since I got 102.2%.... I actually get what your referencing! Nice! I LOVE space.
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I wanna know what it meanssss
your wording is flawless! -
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it's basically about a lover, who is never really around, but you convince yourself they love you anyways.
(zodiac is the imaginary belt that extends across the sky)
sooo yeah
doesnt make much sense...
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I'm not sure what this all means ... I could venture a guess but you know, sometimes even I am afraid to wrong when I know I'm probably so, so far from the truth because my explanation doesn't make sense.
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haha, well I don't think this poem makes much sense either....
it could either be about God or something -though that's not how I intended it.
or about a lover, who is never really around, but you convince yourself they love you anyways.
(zodiac is the imaginary belt that extends across the sky)
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God woman!
You're amazing.
Shiish, I wish I could write like this. ♥
Luff you!
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aww, you're a sweetie-cake!
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