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My shadow

I don’t know why
But you’re in my memories
A dark shadow
That’s watching over me
It brings me peace
And a feeling of calm
To know you’re always there
Even in my dreams
Are you a guardian angel
A memory from my past
A heart that’s tied to mine
Regardless of who you are
You're  still a friend of mine

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To June Bug for being a good friend, and always being there when I need her.

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  • klassy lassy
    August 7, 2007

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    Beautiful sentiment in this. Friends are such gifts.

    A suggestion in critique: change the word 'whom' to 'who' and 'your' to you're. K.


  • debilynn gold member
    May 19, 2007

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    what a lovely little write! sure to please that special person! thank you for sharing this. God bless you always


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    April 16, 2007
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    Very Heartwarming!!!

  • A floatingleaf silver member
    March 22, 2007

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    Very nice, June is so lucky...I like to think I have someone over my shoulder, giving me support, most of the time I feel he is out there for me...enjoyed your write...sunny


  • Sandygram
    March 22, 2007

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    Wonderful My Dear Friend

    Oh Charlie, This was so wonderful and she so deserves this poem. She is such a dear friend to us and many others. She is always there to bring a smile, just as you do. my friend. I miss that contagious smiles of yours. June is so dear and so full of compassion. Thank you for writing this for her. God Bless you my friend. May you stay safe and find happiness and love. Alway a friend, Love, Sandy


  • Lady Ireland gold member
    March 19, 2007

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    Charlie a fitting tribute to a dear friend. hold on to her because they are very rare!
    Thanks for sharing this with me. stay well and most importantly stay safe.
    Slán Dolores xx


  • gullionmar
    March 17, 2007
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    very lovely

    very lovely your shadow will love this great job


  • panegyric ink
    March 17, 2007
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    excellence in friendships

    this is so well written, it almost reads like a dream!!!! great love went into this one. June Bug is very lucky to have you as a good friend, with such beautiful poetry that really obviously so comes from the very depths of a person's heart!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • June-bug
    March 17, 2007

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    I Love it

    I love it!!! It just totally floored me I didn't expect this when I clicked. I don't know what you call it, but I know the feeling, oh so well, you are always in my thoughts, I carry you in my heart and you're forever in my prayers. It has been my pleasure for you bring so much joy to my life. Oh I don't know what more to say, except thank you for the smile. Thanks for the laughs, I still think of that little boy and girl. Thank you!!


  • Layla Thomas
    March 17, 2007
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    lovely piece, sentimental, inviting... well said, well read, much enjoyed

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