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My Awakening

Ive let the past two years
pass before me
careless to the fact
that i lost everything

so ive started again
maybe its what i needed
but i never knew it would be so hard
still it kills to look back

what was i thinking?
what am i thinking now?
how do you start over?
i guess i just needed another chance

Please tell me what you think

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  • Ika
    March 29, 2007
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    good

    i like the flow. i can relate to this in a way.


  • Irishguy001
    March 19, 2007
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    Id almost given up checking this place anymore. Good poem man. I know what you mean.

  • vanyel
    March 17, 2007

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    wow i loved it yeh itd b hard to start everything over n its always gd to get another chance anway gr8 write n keep it up luv amirah