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A Journey

I'll walk you alone over walls and rivers.
With tears I'll lift you above what's real.
Between hell and my heaven, little differs.
But walk with me longer, hear my spiel.

This walk alone unfolds the sky's secret lied.
Cloud and star dissolve in mystery.
Up slippery slopes just to plant beauty's seed;
Chase in flight what could be history.

Isolated in love as dancing stars sing,
Your visage formed of smiles unmade.
Beyond you is beauty those smiles could bring
Yet only on me your decisions are weighed.

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  • McFairy
    March 17, 2007

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    Silly me

    I'm sorry but my vocabulary is not where it should be, and I have to ask... what does spiel mean and lied? And just before I get it wrong, are you writing as God?

    ***Strangeangel***


    • Kelfeno
      March 18, 2007
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      "hear my spiel" kind of means "hear out what I have to say" or "hear my pitch"

      lied is the German word for song and in English basically means a romantic German type song.