I'm a wreck without you.
I'm going insane.
I can't get the thoughts
To leave my brain.
I feel like my insides
Have been devoured by death.
I'm constantly shaky
And I can't catch my breath.
I don't understand
How all this occurred.
Everything was perfect,
But this is absurd.
The moment you left
You took away my heart.
You said from the beginning
Never would we part.
What I thought to be true
Turned out to be a lie,
And it hurts me so much
To have to say goodbye.
You said you don't love me,
You're feelings are now gone.
Why couldn't you tell me sooner?
Why did you string me along?
I wish we could go back
And be as we used to be.
We were happy together,
Forever, you and me.
How could you let us go?
All the times we spent...
And even though you hurt me,
I still thought we were meant.
I want to break down,
Let all this hurt come out,
But I can't let anyone know
I still love you without a doubt.
Author notes
i broke up with jerry. it hurts so bad. i just wanna go back in time to the tower or the mansions, or even the park. we had so many good times together and ill never forget them. never. i still love him ya know...idk how to get past this one....
*Rachel n Jerry 2/25/06-3/14/07* why did it have to end?
Please tell me what you think
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O shit!
wow i love this poem
*tear*
sorry
kno wat ha heart brake is like
but stringing ppl along
sorry that sux
u have grate rhythem
but in stanza 5 line 4
i'd change it to: "To say goodbye"
it fits better than what u have.
it keeps ur rhythem!
and even though u r hurt
u still have the time to rhyme!\Good job
and let me just say the best way to get over him
is give in time!
ur in Heart Repair!!!!
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beautifully tragic
I loved this poem. It flowed amazingly!!!! The feeling of loss does hurt (i should know) it will get better i promise!!! Amazing poem! i love it.
BTW thanks for the comment on my poem....juss thought i would return the favor =)
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Wow good poem. I'm sorry about the break up. Keep ya head up!
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*HUGE HUGS* baby, Im so sorry! Im here for you. Let me know if you need anything.
However, your poem was VERY well written, great imagry. Wonderful!
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i am sorry your going through so much pain... it hurts to lose your love but one day it will get easier. i hope things work for you and you find happiness soon
regards
Jen
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