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Let me be Someone I'm Not...

Let me be someone I'm not,
Let me be more in your vision.
Let me be skinny like you,
Let me be pale as snow.

Let me be someone I'm not,
someone you can trust.
I want to be special,
someone you can care for.

Let me be someone I'm not,
someone you can hold.
I want to be perfect,
someone you can love...

Please tell me what you think....please...

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  • grannyeri gold member
    March 31, 2007
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    Why is it we always want to be someone else, and are never satisfied with who we are? We can't be perfect, no one is, yet we imagine others to be, especially if they think someone else will love them for it. Liked the flow and the message this poem shares.


  • Kyleen
    March 28, 2007

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    It's short and straightforward, which works very well for this piece. As always, there's much love and wanting feeling very prevalent here. *gold stars*


  • XStuckInANightmareX
    March 17, 2007

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    This is awesome. I know exactly how you feel. I freaking love this. Great write dad, keep it up.♥