As the years have passed,
And birthdays and such have come and gone,
I've always found it satisfying to give.
For me, although always fun to receive,
I always love the excitement that comes
When I'm about to give a gift or something.
Many great people have given for the better,
Sacrificing something that is great to them.
So why not use their example,
Why not give?
A contest entry
- Give Or Receive? by AliceinPoetryLand.
525 points, ended March 17, 2007, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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a good piece of poetry you have penned here, the rhythm and flow are nice and steady. giving and receiving, both are cool
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It's better to give than to recieve. I also love seeing the excitement on the other persons face when they recieve a gift from me. I really like this poem. It has a great meaning. Good write dear!
Megan -
Very nicely penned. Your sentiments are inspirational.
Thank you for shrinyour thoughts in my contest.
Gaylene
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