Somewhere beyond the rainbow,
In a watercolour sky,
Her lovely face you’ll picture,
In clouds as they pass by.
A mother's love is special.
And, though no longer by your side,
Even now, she's looking down,
Her heart still filled with pride.
You'll always feel her presence.
She's just a thought away.
She'll still be there, to take your hand,
should troubles come your way.
Your mom will walk beside you,
No matter where you are.
She’s just stepped into another room
And left the door ajar.
In a list
A contest entry
- Lossing your Mom &/or Dad by Shacadia Shay.
390 points, ended March 24, 2007, 13 entries
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600 points, ended May 22, 2007, 24 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - For Julia by Khadidja the Wise.
450 points, ended June 4, 2007, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Open Doors by Celticjedi.
450 points, ended June 21, 2007, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ~*~ A message of hope ~*~ by Tears from within.
353 points, ended June 28, 2007, 16 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wow this poem gave me goose bumps and almost brang a tear to my eye. Wonderful and very beautiful I like that you actually wrote something that is talking about his mother. Billy Joe will love this poem, thank you so much for sharing this in my contest. God Bless and Good luck!
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I loved this so much. Although my relationship with my own mother is a little rocky right now, I can still feel the powerful love and truth you've woven into this piece. One of my favorite songs too lol! Very clever. Thanks so much for entering, keep up the amazing work. You are talented!
Luvs,
Cj
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This poem is very touchingly written and though not necessarily happy, it does comfort. It has a lovely flow and the images are very intense.
Thank you for entering this in my contest.
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Beautiful
You poem is liquid beauty as the words just flow from one to another. Good imagery, very good content, and the rhyme is good. Worthy of the Gold in my opinion, but then I'm not a judge. Keep on writing.
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Thank you very much for your kind comments. They are much appreciated.
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Oh my! Wow, I am speechless. This really touched me, deeply. A beautiful and uplifting poem. I love the ending. Thanks so much for this entry and good luck.
Jeannie
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this is sad but it gives you a warm fuzzy feeling inside. i'm sorry bout your mom. best of luck in my contest.
--Blessed be--
Dark Princess Vampire -
Beautiful.
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