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Rosy Cheeks

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  • bird at rose
    April 4, 2007

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    I'm excited to comment

    Good pick here.

    It is a fact that her style of cuisine won't necessarily stick to muscles but flow with the circulation moving the nutrients around. So, you aren't going to see many ppl with flabby faces unless they prefer eating at McDonalds more than at hers, heehee.

    I checked my criteria as that's part of my assignment for this contest, but you didn't fail one bit.

    However, even though noone commented on this piece yet except me, you still left to risk that you left out what was requested to be done in rule #4. You can ask me as many things as you want only in the author notes though 'cuz mine is anonymous. Please don't reply outside the AN or rate me.

    I will look repeatedly to see if you added that feature in the author notes, you're in my finalists because I trust that you will do a simple thing.