1. Pink Eggs and Ham
2. Personally Pink
3. Pinky Up
4. Happily Pink
A contest entry
- Help me finish the project that's in my head. by bird at rose.
450 points, ended April 25, 2007, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Hi to one of my glowing entries,
How inspiring you were taking 'Green Eggs and Ham,' and going and making it your own in, "Pink Eggs and Ham." If you want me to tell you something funny, then I found that the Apple Snail lays pink eggs. In representation to her restaurant with that being said, she would do slower cooking for healthy results crawling carefully, lol! I took that much meaning into that name because I don't want to take the original usage from the book... and yet, there's also cooked spinach with eggs regarding that account plainly. Your twist of the name is appreciated, it's what made me view this 'cuz it was in the brief preview! How sweet even more if you based your background on that name with the leafy color being lessened. My criteria was followed strongly with this one.
Your second idea has meaning without bragging that it's going to be the best place in the world, but trying her best. Instead, she believes in her mind that most should go there for incomplex porcelains if they don't want to go to the grocery store. Well, it made a good advertisement although it isn't the cutest, but it still fit all rules and criteria which makes me like it even more. Thank you for that one.
The next one is a nice tribute for saying something like "Thumbs Up" in plain English, but you took it to the hilarious zone past boasting to just a portion of goodness that'll be served, I was first thinking! Maybe, another thought is, sweep up the dirty food to bring in the clean items? I also feel you mean that the taste'll be so good that licking fingers will occur! Most importantly, when you hold a cup, to slow down the pace for good digestion involved, you hold the "pinky up." A delightful name it was... so much so that your remarkable third name sounded better than my setup for my fifth criteria, LOL!
4. Happily Pink. I agree, you have to make people want to change their eating style before they'll just do it. SplishSplashPencil wants to thank you for reminding me all of that to keep the public interested in opening the wallet and mouth maybe, or at least the door to the menu. Pink also accepts that it isn't a chore to bring her ideas of food to others because everyone is smiling with her opinions, even the employees. Criteria isn't a problem for this one either.
An appointment to comment, but still excited myself for doing this,
Daisy
P.S. Two things... one is easy in that you need to go back and look at my 4th rule and see what you need to put in the author notes. The other is I see you haven't rated or replied to the other person who commented, so could you please not do that for me 'cause mine's anonymous? You can write in the author notes as long as you want, however.
Thanks for your painted entry. -
Cute! Especially Pinky Up although Personally Pink also has a nice ring to it! Good luck!
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