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That this life is real

dear friend,
-my immortality
hurts you
-my lies
make you question the truth
-i wanna be perfect
you know...
-i wanna be ablle to have
no untold confessions
-my simulations
make you wonder
-my innocence
confusses you
-i dont understand
why this whole friend thing
has to be so difficult
-my sudden disasters
worry you
-my sordid sins
are still scattering
-this lost friendship
does it mean anything to you
-my corrupted home
scares you
-my bruises
give you no douth
[that this life is real]

Author notes

this is my first dictionary poem.. a dictionary poem is a type of poem i made up.. what you do is you open the dictionary and pick a page and use words from the page or pages to write a poem.. i think it came out pretty well

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  • in-the-twilight
    March 20, 2007

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    This did turn out pretty well... with exception of some grammar stuff and spelling errors... but still this was good! Rock oN! xoxo Meg