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Women that (loved me and) left me

Too many Jennifer's
Spreading shit and lies

3 so far have pissed on me

To watch me die inside

 

Sam tried to be my friend

Without hesitation

Told everyone bullshit too

Ruined my reputation

 

Steph thought it funny

That no-one ever cared

Once all I needed

was to be noticed I was there

 

Maxine came so close

To making me live again

Then she fucked my brother

At a party in my honour

 

Tahnee hurt so bad

Denied we ever were

She was my first kiss

As I was for her

 

1 I thought I'd found my match

Wierd and strange like me

But I'd been taking the wrong signals

It was never meant to be

 

Lisa was the strangest

But no-one will belive me

She tried to make us play "ghost"

With me as Patrick and her as Demi

(not much fun for a 7 year old)

 

Megan she still loves me

Although we're never together

It's a brother sister love

Through 3000 miles of ether

 

Jasmine was so groovy

Sunni side of life

Another friend of mine

Who's now another's wife (Sort've)

 

Kelly changed me so fast

I became a happy thing

But I was too clingy

There's was always another, waiting in the wings

 

To any of you that read this.

Some of you fucked me up

But some of you stick by me

Thanks

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  • HisPrincessMaloka
    February 16
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    Holy Crap Christof I don't think you have any idea how much i miss you....

  • Black Swan Rose
    March 17, 2007

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    1 I thought I'd found my match

    Wierd and strange like me

    But I'd been taking the wrong signals

    It was never meant to be



    liked these lines here


  • NoWayJo
    March 17, 2007

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    Nothing like name-tossing in poetry--And Maxine must feel so honored!

    I've no doubt that each of these women you've loved are true to your life, and though the poem read to me as more "cute" than "revenge-seeking," I bet you could do each of these ladies complete justice by their own poem--(NOT a revenge-seeking one, but one of what you saw and felt by each of them).

    Take good care, and I hope there'll be no "edits" to include others into this poem-mix!

    Jo

  • xxsexy-paigexx
    March 17, 2007
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    very deep

    i know how u feel and your poem sounds really deep... carry on writing...its very good!


  • XxGoldenxXDawnxX
    March 17, 2007

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    The search for love is never an easy one.
    I hope you find what you are looking for though it is not an easy task.

  • HisPrincessMaloka
    March 16, 2007

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    I'll always stick by you, but I miss you!!!! I haven't talked to you for so long!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Call me! If you need my number message me.


  • StarEyes
    March 16, 2007

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    Welcome Back Christof!!!!!!! I have missed you! This is great and sad at the same time!!! And yeah, I can relate! even though I am a woman, I know how you feel as the same thing has happened to me too! You did a great job on this one kiddo! I loved it!!!

    Hope to see more from you soon! Keep that pen flowing, I will be here reading!

    Love ya,

    Auntie Nyetta


    • Borrowed Goose
      March 16, 2007
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      Hey Auntie. I've not been on much recently. Lots of reasons. I've missed everyone I normally talk to as well (which would be you Chell and Megan) I'm sorry. I'm not feeling great at the mo.


  • Borrowed Goose
    March 16, 2007
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    grumble grunt

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