I walk with you in moments that align
Then touch your hand to tell you I am near
Gazing into your eyes for any sign
Of trepidation, anxiousness, or fear
These many miles that we have shared this day
Have left all fears as dust upon these roads
Trusted companions as we make our way
We share the weight of one another’s loads
Beyond the path is more to share than this
Love’s colors to be seen, melodies heard
A new star in the sky with every kiss
A new song in the heart with every word
I step into your path so we may see
What kind of loving mirrors can we be
Author notes
I don't believe you can find a poem of hers I have not commented on. I list them all.
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A contest entry
- In honor of Amera by Swan song.
680 points, ended August 19, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I AM A SUCKY SONNET WRITER SONNET CONTEST by Swan song.
850 points, ended January 4, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I can't believe I missed this. It's beautiful for her beauty.
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This was very good excellent cadence well done and thank you so much for etering my contest
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It is so easy to see why Amera has inspired so many lovely poems. She is such a joy! And she writes from her heart... As did you in this very loving write!
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Again this is a beautiful take well written with excellent rhyme and meter. Nothing has been forced.
Every word you have written looks and sounds as if it belongs there. No responce please but a very lovely poem.
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Another beautiful poem about Amera! Just lovely!
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This is why I love you!
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A sonnet to be proud of. One that has a lover's touch and a fine melody. I so enjoyed the read.
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Great tribute and partnership found in this..and sure she truly treasures it as well...what a companionship...good job!
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very beautiful Allan I am never dissapointed when I read you
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Very Good. Only the best for Amera. That is why she has you.
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