A simple thought to put into consideration
Especially when you feel you're about to give in
Always remember that good boys don't drink
You've worked so hard to turn your ways around
Fought your way through the objects in your path
Promise me you'll always remember one thing
When you feel you're about to trip
Just remember that good boys don't drink
There will always be that chance
When temptation gets overbearing
Don't ever think that you can't make it through
You know who to go to when you need someone
I'll be here to remind you of one little thing
Good boys don't drink
A contest entry
- The Title Is... by zillion.
300 points, ended March 20, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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awe...
this is sad but yet there is that hint of hope and subtle promise...I love this a lot and I think that he should've taken this adive a little more seriously, I know it's been hard for you and I just wanted to say that I think that this is a wickedly awesome write, just for the fact that I've known what you've been through and everything and I know that it's hard to put into the right words, but I think that you did an awesome job
Keep the faith.
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This is really good... but in my town that saying wont be much good because everyone wants that bad boy/girl impression! Still a great write! Inspirational! Rock on! xoxo Meg
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Having many family members that are alcoholics, I believe that this poem had a hard meaning. One that is easier said that done, ya know? It’s hard to stop drinking once you’re addicted, as it is with any type of drug. I guess wish people would stop and think about what their consequences might have on other people. Drunks can’t think that way though, can they?
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This is great and its such an inspirational poem for someone who may find themselves in that situation. Well done and best of luck for the contest.
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