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Misused and Misplaced

Lost to the point of recklessness,
My life serves no meaning; I'm scared.
A whimper cast into silence,
My fate's arrived much too soon.

Misused and misplaced,
My cries just aren't heard.
The world doesn't know me,
Its chance won't appear.

Too young to understand,
But the pain makes it known.

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  • slipperssun gold member
    April 4, 2007

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    wow this has a real depth to it... the intense emotions can be felt by the reader... well done
    cheers
    Jen


  • myorama
    March 26, 2007

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    Sadly moving

    This evokes many sad thoughts in my mind and heart but I am glad to know that all things can be overcome with faith. Very well written. God Bless.


  • The Life Led
    March 22, 2007

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    So deep and understandable. You've written a great piece, I can easily relate to this and I'm sure many other people can too. Amazing!


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    March 16, 2007

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    Very deep and sincere. An emotion driven little piece.

    Thanks for sharing... x

    Love and light,
    Butterfly.