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Happyness and Sadness

The world is a game
It is so full of shame

I like it but i'm afraid
I need some aid

But the world is full of life
eventualy it will be the afterlife

We are different
But we are also indifferent

We are one
we are like the rays of the sun

Attached by the same line
even though we don't always shine

We are happy and we are sad
But at the end where all glad

To have friends
With us till the ends

Of time and space
this is one test we will shurely ace.

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  • daruvial
    April 2, 2007
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    sigh

    LONGER, GOOD
    BUT NEEDS TO
    BE LONGER! YOU HAVE
    AWESOME POTENTIAL
    JUST USE IT TO UR EXTENT


  • Honestly Amazing
    March 17, 2007
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    Aleks! This is wonderful!!!!!
    yaaayyyyy
    I'm glad I told you to write.
    yayyyy! *is very excited* yaaayyyy
    keep on writing!!!
    I am going to give you three clappy thingys!!!

    ,
    Sim


  • Raven Tears gold member
    March 16, 2007
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    A very powerful and meaningful write.
    You have so much truth behind your words.
    It was really well written.
    Be proud you have a knack for writing.
    Keep up the great work.
    Love and Light

    ~Raven Tears~