Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Inner feelings.

I want my own life.
Not your total control of me.
Why do you do this,
What have I done to you?


Please just let me be.
Im not your slave.
Why is it you cant see,
Is it because of everyone else?

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • UnityHope
    April 1, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    very good expression of emotions!
    so sad and tragic
    well done
    luv dani xxoo

  • saseychik0688
    March 19, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    good write..im not intirely sure what your meaning in this write but it is good....good expression of emotions.

  • Lost-Rose-Petal
    March 17, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    wow...totally have experienced that.,.not the best thing to have been through...great write!
    MINDIE
  • SecretMe15
    March 16, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    I'm kind've confused with this. It's seems like someone is bossing you and not letting you be yourself and take care of your on life, and if that is the case always remember that being yourself is the best thing you can do for yourself but don't shove people away who are trying to help you. Don't let anyone tell you who/what you should be. Being yourself is what matters. You should also add a little more detail.