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sasuke

the avenger

he hates the attention ino and sakura push

sometimes i wonder

if he has to hide in a bush

sakura is loud and trys to be sweet

but he pushes her away

she wont admit defeat

ino is semi quiet

she is really outgoing

sasuke pushes her away to

but she wont give up

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  • Baka Demon
    March 28, 2007

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    *nods nods*

    It was really good. I really liked the flow of the poem. ^^ And how you're talking about Sasuke, Sakura, and Ino. xD Naruto rawks. Rock on, my friend. xD


  • Red Rose of Light
    March 24, 2007
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    good

    simple but good and true its funny I'd push them away to


  • papercrane
    March 16, 2007
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    nice poem and flow