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Potent Lies

This feeling in the air is tight
The smell of perfume all around
A fixation of ones fantasy
I feel her in this room
She was here with you last night
Under your covers
In your bed
I feel myself falling down in the dread
How could you have done this to me?
Made me feel all sad and alone
You made me put up my shield
I once wore down
I have the feeling of extasy no more for you
Now all I want to do is throw away this heart
I feel myself falling into a hole
Why did you do this to me?
You ripped out my heart
You threw it on the ground
You filled her heart with ectasy
In your bed you two connected
Drunk and out of control
Your mouth your lips touching hers
This feeling of remorse I feel
Makes me put up this wall
I felt you down in her core
The perfume drowns in you
I smell it I feel it its all around
This potent feeling of darkness and light
You make me feel sick!
I hate you I hate you I say
Now out of my way!
Leave me alone you fool
Don't come near me no more
You say it was a mistake
Oh yes it was a mistake
For now you shall learn
That I drowned out
Your sorrowful pities
And pleading on one knee
Your out
your gone
you are no more
Goodbye sweet heart
Hope she was good
Cause i'm done with your useless cheating heart!

Author notes

Think of Carrie Underwoods "Before he Cheats" When you read this

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  • The Cube
    May 7, 2007

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    Great poem I like it. Definately captured good and angry emotion here. Althouh extasy should be ecstasy. Great job!


  • A Murderous Lament
    March 22, 2007

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    Lol.

    Love the authors note. Great song. Can just imagine it as I read it. Great job. I love the ending of the poem. Awesome.

    A MURDEROUS LAMENT <\33